Argumentatitve Text ― General Election

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Uncovering Fraud in The 2024 Election in Indonesia

Thesis

Indonesia held a general election on February 14, 2024. This election is the fifth general election in Indonesia which aims to elect the President and Vice President of the Republic of Indonesia. The President of Indonesia is directly elected by the people through general elections every five years. However, in this general election, there were many problems that occurred and eventually became a debate throughout the community. One of them is about cheating in entering the final score of each election.

 

C.   Argument 1: Many ballots were spoiled, switched and lost.

One of the main problems observed during the election was widespread ballot damage. Many instances were reported where voters accidentally marked more than one candidate or had their votes invalidated due to unclear instructions. Reports of ballot papers being switched during the vote counting process have also added to people's concerns. Several cases where ballot boxes from different polling stations were accidentally or intentionally swapped have been documented. This chaos poses a serious threat to the accuracy of election results and jeopardizes the democratic foundations of the electoral process. In addition, the loss of ballot papers has emerged as a critical issue, jeopardizing the entire exercise of democracy. The disappearance of ballot papers not only raises questions about the security of election materials, but also undermines citizens' trust in the electoral process. A comprehensive investigation is essential to identify the root causes of spoiled, switched and lost ballots and to implement corrective measures to prevent such incidents in future elections.

 

D.    Argument 2: The ballot boxes were not sealed properly.

Another problem is that ballot boxes are not properly sealed and this jeopardizes the fundamental integrity of the electoral process. The lack of adequate seals raises questions about the authenticity of the votes, leading to uncertainty about whether the election results truly reflect the will of the people. Democracy thrives on the principles of transparency and fairness. Poorly sealed ballot boxes undermine these principles, and cast a shadow on the legitimacy of elections. This jeopardizes the essence of democratic governance, which relies on the trust and confidence of voters. The absence of security seals on ballot boxes opens the door to potential electoral fraud. Without adequate protection, there is an increased risk of tampering, unauthorized access or the insertion of fraudulent votes, threatening the accuracy and validity of election results. Election authorities should take immediate steps to rectify the sealing issue, implementing stricter measures to ensure the security and integrity of the electoral process in future elections.

 

E.     Argument 3: Polling stations start late to polling stations that are inflexible to people with disabilities.

The final problem of this election was the delayed opening of polling stations which raised serious concerns about the efficiency and organization of the electoral process. Delays in opening can lead to long queues, inconvenience for voters, and may even discourage some people from exercising their democratic rights. This undermines the principle of a smooth and accessible electoral experience for all citizens. Ensuring that polling stations open on time is critical to upholding the democratic ideal of inclusive participation. Inaccessible polling stations can hinder the participation of persons with disabilities, violating the principles of equal and inclusive representation. These omissions not only undermine the rights of voters with disabilities, but also perpetuate inequalities in society. Authorities should prioritize the establishment of accessible and accommodating polling stations for voters with disabilities, to ensure that every citizen can participate in the electoral process without discrimination. To address these issues, comprehensive reforms in the organization of elections are needed. This includes improved planning, coordination and infrastructure development to ensure the timely start of polling stations and the establishment of disability-friendly polling stations. Investments in technology and training for election officials are also essential for a smoother and more inclusive electoral process.

Conclusion:

In summary, the 2024 Indonesian general election faced significant challenges, sparking widespread debate. The primary focus was on the integrity of the results, with three key issues identified. Firstly, widespread damage to ballot papers, including accidental markings and switched ballots, posed a serious threat to accuracy, prompting the need for a comprehensive investigation and corrective measures. Secondly, improper sealing of ballot boxes raised doubts about the fundamental integrity of the electoral process, necessitating immediate steps to rectify the issue and prevent potential fraud. Lastly, delayed polling station openings and inaccessible locations hindered inclusive participation, emphasizing the need for comprehensive reforms, including improved planning, coordination, infrastructure development, and technology investments, to ensure a smoother and more inclusive electoral process in the future. The next general election must have significant changes, to make Indonesia a wise democratic country.

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